Every time the same question..
And each time round the same answer..
My friends ask me "what’s it now?"
And i say" Nothings wrong"..
Every time I feel a little down..
Every time I have a fall.
Every time a friend tries to pry..
I just say "Nothings wrong"..
As each dream fades away..
As night comes down on this day..
Why does this heart weigh down with pain..
I ask n answer "Nothings wrong"..
Till how long will I try to hide..
Emotions boiling deep inside..
And keep on smiling as I say..
"Everything is fine, Nothings Wrong"..
Everything is fine, still there's something wrong, i don't know what...Somethings missing inspite of i having everything, i don't know what made me write this peom but i was asking this question to myself and answer i got was 'cheer up nothing's wrong'..may be you would ask the same question after reading this....i don't know may be 'nothings wrong'
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21 comments:
Neha said...
i guess it happens sometimes, although everything seems to be fine , something keeps disturbing
nice read :)
Navchawla said...
ooh wow..i m not alone in this too..cool to add to ur thought i m also posting something at my blog come n have a look :)
IceMaiden said...
heyy... it was SO perfect to describe wht has been on my mind lately. it was a wonderful read.
:)
J. said...
oh you know this is not new, i guess its human tendency, i guess
so chill and enjoy
cheers
Anonymous said...
been through this phase day in day out.. went straight to my heart.. Chintan poetry is your forte trust me ..:)
jack said...
@neha
hmm i know neha, it happens bit often with me :)
jack said...
@naveen
i feel its very common thing, well off to your blog :)
jack said...
@annie
hey nice to see i am not alone, :P just kidding, i am glad you liked it :)
jack said...
@ joy
yes thats what i think, so many people feeling the same thing as me.. i guess its quiet natural thing
jack said...
@ kajal
hey thank you princess :P, just kidding
it was straight from my heart too, i think poetries are the best when they are from heart
Unknown said...
hey that was nice read, hope you fine now
i think the sole reason why one feel so is because he thinks too much, same is the case with you
think less enjoy more :)
jack said...
@arpita
oh i am fine 'nothing's wrong' lolzz, but you right sometimes thinking more cause problem
point taken
:)
Akanksha Yadav said...
Nice One...!!
Saket Ranjan said...
Cheer Up!! I hope Nothing's wrong and even if there is one, you will be able to overcome that!!
Cheerzz
jack said...
@akansha
thanks for dropping by..keep visiting :)
jack said...
@saket
hey its all ok bro..its just a funny feeling which happens sometime..
:)
Arjun said...
Ahh..!! That was nice..
So relateable.. :)
I second Neha in this... :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
jack said...
@arjun
thanx man, i am glad you liked it
Mahesh Sindbandge said...
i shudnt say i am also one of them.
it wont be new thing to say.
i should say this thing would be there till you find the right person of your life,in other words a soulmate i would say.
i dont know whether u believe it or not,but in any other language too it remains the same.
you start missing the half part of yours,when you start realising what life is or when you start living life.
dont worries..that will end somewhere..
it was a nice poem that made me write all this u see.. :)
jack said...
hey mahesh you got it spot on buddy :)
i didnt mention in the poem but thats the only reason,
it happens when you just out of relationship or not having any
thanks for dropping by,
will love to see more from you :)
Kabir said...
it was a read which expressed so many lonely hearts in this crowded world ...
great dude