Every time the same question..
And each time round the same answer..
My friends ask me "what’s it now?"
And i say" Nothings wrong"..

Every time I feel a little down..
Every time I have a fall.
Every time a friend tries to pry..
I just say "Nothings wrong"..

As each dream fades away..
As night comes down on this day..
Why does this heart weigh down with pain..
I ask n answer "Nothings wrong"..

Till how long will I try to hide..
Emotions boiling deep inside..
And keep on smiling as I say..
"Everything is fine, Nothings Wrong"..

Everything is fine, still there's something wrong, i don't know what...Somethings missing inspite of i having everything, i don't know what made me write this peom but i was asking this question to myself and answer i got was 'cheer up nothing's wrong'..may be you would ask the same question after reading this....i don't know may be 'nothings wrong'



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21 comments:

    Neha said...

    i guess it happens sometimes, although everything seems to be fine , something keeps disturbing

    nice read :)

  1. ... on February 3, 2009 at 3:32 AM  
  2. Navchawla said...

    ooh wow..i m not alone in this too..cool to add to ur thought i m also posting something at my blog come n have a look :)

  3. ... on February 3, 2009 at 3:46 AM  
  4. IcE MaiDeN said...

    heyy... it was SO perfect to describe wht has been on my mind lately. it was a wonderful read.

    :)

  5. ... on February 3, 2009 at 8:33 AM  
  6. J. said...

    oh you know this is not new, i guess its human tendency, i guess
    so chill and enjoy

    cheers

  7. ... on February 3, 2009 at 1:19 PM  
  8. the pink orchid said...

    been through this phase day in day out.. went straight to my heart.. Chintan poetry is your forte trust me ..:)

  9. ... on February 3, 2009 at 2:35 PM  
  10. jack said...

    @neha
    hmm i know neha, it happens bit often with me :)

  11. ... on February 3, 2009 at 8:26 PM  
  12. jack said...

    @naveen
    i feel its very common thing, well off to your blog :)

  13. ... on February 3, 2009 at 8:28 PM  
  14. jack said...

    @annie
    hey nice to see i am not alone, :P just kidding, i am glad you liked it :)

  15. ... on February 3, 2009 at 8:29 PM  
  16. jack said...

    @ joy
    yes thats what i think, so many people feeling the same thing as me.. i guess its quiet natural thing

  17. ... on February 3, 2009 at 8:30 PM  
  18. jack said...

    @ kajal
    hey thank you princess :P, just kidding
    it was straight from my heart too, i think poetries are the best when they are from heart

  19. ... on February 3, 2009 at 8:32 PM  
  20. Arpita said...

    hey that was nice read, hope you fine now
    i think the sole reason why one feel so is because he thinks too much, same is the case with you

    think less enjoy more :)

  21. ... on February 4, 2009 at 12:54 AM  
  22. jack said...

    @arpita
    oh i am fine 'nothing's wrong' lolzz, but you right sometimes thinking more cause problem
    point taken
    :)

  23. ... on February 4, 2009 at 1:31 AM  
  24. आकांक्षा~Akanksha said...

    Nice One...!!

  25. ... on February 6, 2009 at 12:44 PM  
  26. Saket said...

    Cheer Up!! I hope Nothing's wrong and even if there is one, you will be able to overcome that!!

    Cheerzz

  27. ... on February 6, 2009 at 1:47 PM  
  28. jack said...

    @akansha
    thanks for dropping by..keep visiting :)

  29. ... on February 6, 2009 at 5:13 PM  
  30. jack said...

    @saket
    hey its all ok bro..its just a funny feeling which happens sometime..

    :)

  31. ... on February 6, 2009 at 5:14 PM  
  32. Arjun said...

    Ahh..!! That was nice..
    So relateable.. :)

    I second Neha in this... :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

  33. ... on February 10, 2009 at 12:53 PM  
  34. jack said...

    @arjun
    thanx man, i am glad you liked it

  35. ... on February 11, 2009 at 1:08 AM  
  36. Mahesh Sindbandge said...

    i shudnt say i am also one of them.
    it wont be new thing to say.
    i should say this thing would be there till you find the right person of your life,in other words a soulmate i would say.
    i dont know whether u believe it or not,but in any other language too it remains the same.
    you start missing the half part of yours,when you start realising what life is or when you start living life.
    dont worries..that will end somewhere..
    it was a nice poem that made me write all this u see.. :)

  37. ... on February 20, 2009 at 1:02 AM  
  38. jack said...

    hey mahesh you got it spot on buddy :)
    i didnt mention in the poem but thats the only reason,
    it happens when you just out of relationship or not having any

    thanks for dropping by,
    will love to see more from you :)

  39. ... on February 20, 2009 at 8:20 PM  
  40. Kabir said...

    it was a read which expressed so many lonely hearts in this crowded world ...
    great dude

  41. ... on April 29, 2009 at 8:45 AM